I like the overall pattern of marks on this one, and the interplay between the arrows and the other lines. At first glance the page just looks like a loosely scattered field of marks and shapes, but the arrows lead you to start following them, and once you get going the narrative unfolds very easily.
My only suggestion would be that in panel one the necklace might be lower in the drawing (falling past that heavy horizontal line between her and the ground) with longer vertical falling lines like the ones you use near the end of the page. That would draw the eye more firmly down to the bottom of that “panel” where the first arrow takes you back up and to the right.
The Dragon Funnies 
I like the overall pattern of marks on this one, and the interplay between the arrows and the other lines. At first glance the page just looks like a loosely scattered field of marks and shapes, but the arrows lead you to start following them, and once you get going the narrative unfolds very easily.
My only suggestion would be that in panel one the necklace might be lower in the drawing (falling past that heavy horizontal line between her and the ground) with longer vertical falling lines like the ones you use near the end of the page. That would draw the eye more firmly down to the bottom of that “panel” where the first arrow takes you back up and to the right.
Nice work!